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An Accident [看图作文]
来自: 作者:匿名 发布时间:2007-9-12 21:02:29

An Accident


下面图画描述的是发生在学校办公楼的一件事。请为学校黑板报用英语写一篇短文,介绍此事。
注意:短文要包括图画所表现的主要内容,词数100左右。

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思路指津:
1. 时态:由于是讲述一个故事,时态自然是过去时,
2. 谋篇布局:讲述一个故事, 最好以时间为线索组织短文
3. 主题: 注意人物对话, 突出 “Honesty is the best policy” 的中心。

An Accident


参考范文:

 One day, Mr. Li was reading a book in his office after school when a ball broke the window and flew in. Mr. Li was greatly shocked when the ball hit him on the head. He took the ball and came downstairs to see who threw the ball. He met a little boy at the doorway and the boy said it was he who had thrown it. The boy said sorry to Mr. Li and Mr. Li praised the boy for his honesty. Mr. Li told the boy to be more careful next time. The boy thanked him for his kindness and said goodbye to him, running away with the ball.

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