Part IV Error Correction (15 minutes)

McGaffic College is a large school which not only
boasts a beautiful campus, but also is surrounded by
charming rural villages. They offers advantages, such as --71--
small classes, individual counseling and private dorm
rooms, where few schools of its size can match. The co- --72--
llege offers degrees in s wide range of liberal arts fields
though no longer in oriental languages, and have a wide --73--
ranging sports program embracing the most of the usual --74--
collegiate sports, with the exception of football. In cont-
rast with nearby, Perkins College, which requires stude- --75--
nts to live off campus, McGaffic houses all its allmale
student population in dormitories in campus. --76--
The college has a distinguished teaching facul ty
and, in addition to high qualified lecturers, has at least --77--
three artists in residence on campus each year. The coll-
ege’s strength liberal arts bias(倾向) underwent a signif- --78--
icant shift in mid sixties, when it invested in a new scie- --79--
nce building, instead of the new theater which many alu-
mni(男校友), includeing two former governors, would
have preferred it. --80--

答案：71. 改They为It
72. 改where为which
73. 改have为has
74. 划去most前的the
75. 改with为to
76. 改in campus为on campus
77. 改high qualified为highly qualified
78. 改strength为strong
79. mid sixties前加the
80. 划去preferred后的it