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来自: 作者: 发布时间:2006-10-6 14:46:03

  下面来看看改错(Error Correction)部分:
Line 1 The World Health Organization (WHO) says its ten-year
Line 2 campaign to remove leprosy ( 麻风病) as a world health
Line 3 problem has been successful. Doctor Brundtland, head of the
Line 4 WHO, says a number of leprosy cases around the world has ( 改成the)
Line 5 been cut of ninety percent during the past ten years. She says ( 改成 by)
Line 6 efforts are continuing to complete end the disease. ( 改成completely)
Line 7 Leprosy is caused by bacteria spread through liquid from
Line 8 the nose and mouth. The disease mainly effects the skin and (改成 affects)
Line 9 nerves. However, if leprosy is not treated it can cause permanent
Line 10 damage for the skin, nerves, eyes, arms or legs. (改成to)
Line 11 In 1999, an international campaign began to end leprosy.
Line 12 The WHO, governments of countries most affected by the
Line 13 disease, and several other groups are part of the campaign.
Line 14 This alliance guarantees that all leprosy patients, even they (改成even if)
Line 15 are poor, have a right to the most modern treatment.
Line 16 Doctor Brundtland says leprosy is no longer a disease
Line 17 that requires life-long treatments by medical experts. Instead,
Line 18 patients can take that is called a multi-drug therapy. This
Line 19 modern treatment will cure leprosy in 6 to 12 months,
Line 20 depend on the form of the disease. The treatment combines
Line 21 several drugs taken daily or once a month. The WHO has
Line 22 given multi-drug therapy to patients freely for the last five
Line 23 years. The members of the alliance against leprosy plan to
Line 24 target the countries which still threatened by leprosy. Among (改成which are)
Line 25 the estimated 600,000 victims around the world, the WHO
Line 26 believes about 70% are in India. The disease also remains a
Line 27 problem in Africa and South America.
  以上是一篇有关麻风病的文章。其中包含10处错误,容易辨解的我们已经在文章中标出。毫不夸张的说,如果你曾经师从新概念一二册,而且熟练掌握了其中的知识点,以下明显的七处错误是一目了然的。
  错误1:Line 4中a number of 的意思是“大量的”,后面跟谓语复数,因此和谓语动词has有冲突。(新概念二册中会出现许多表示“大量”意思的词组:a great deal of, a great many 等等)而本句话的意思是:全世界麻风病例的数量已经下降了90%。这里需要“……的数量”这一词组,因此改成the number of.
  错误2:Line 5中 be cut by表示下降的幅度。同学们应该早已接触过“by”往往表示一个“差值”,比如he is older than me by three years(他比我大三岁)
  错误3:Line 6 中想表达的意思是:人们正在继续努力完全根除这种疾病。新概念一册中对句子的成分作过专门的分析,副词往往用来修饰动词,所以将形容词complete改成completely修饰end.
  错误4:Line 8 The disease mainly effects the skin and nerves(这种疾病主要会影响到人们的皮肤和神经)。这个考点其实也是词汇问题,句中混淆了effect和affect的词性问题,前者是名词,后者是动词,这两个单词都在新概念前两册书有出现过。
  错误5:Line 10 这里是对同学介词的考核。整句话意思是:如果麻风病没能及时得到治疗,那么它会对我们的皮肤,眼睛,神经,腿脚等起到破坏作用。考的就是cause damage to sth的词组。
  错误6:Line 14:这个联盟向全世界保证,所有的麻风病人,无论他有多么的穷,都有权享受最先进的治疗。大家应该在新概念二册的课堂中接触过,even是“甚至”的意思;而even if 、even though是“即便,即使,无论”的意思,有一种让步的口气。
  错误7: Line 24 当你看到过去分词threatened 以及介词by, 能不想到被动语态?
  以上的7处错误,对于系统学习过新概念一、二册的同学,都是不过是小菜一碟,然而,还有三处隐藏的错误相对比较棘手。英语功底稍逊的学生是很难改出。但只要调动新概念三册中蕴含的知识库,你就能拥有一双“火眼金睛”,胜出常人一筹,识破它们。
  错误8:请看16—18行的内容——leprosy is no longer a disease that requires life-long treatments by medical experts. Instead, patients can take that is called a multi-drug therapy.(麻风病不再是需要终生治疗的疾病了,相反,病人可以接受叫做“多种药物”的治疗。)因为这句话比较复杂,首先进行句子分析。
  在三册尾声出现了一个重要的语法现象:名词性从句,比如Collecting 《收藏》一课中就有这么一句和提干相似的话:Those who never have to move house become indiscriminate collectors of what can only be described as clutter. 这句话主干部分是those become collectors(那些人变成了收藏家);而who never have to move house是修饰那些人是怎么样的人群;后面又出现一个indiscriminate of的词组修饰他们变成无所不容的收藏家。而该词组中介词of后面应该跟上宾语(体现他们到底如何不加选择的收藏,他们到底收藏了什么),我们发现这个宾语不是一般的名词,而是由what引导的句子what can only be described as clutter充当宾语,在语法中我们称之为名词性从句;其中what代表“他们说收藏的东西”,这些东西只能被称作废品。
  现在再来看上面改错的那句话,是不是有豁然开朗的感觉呢? Patients can take that is called a multi-drug therapy.这句话中主干是patients take……病人采取了……。照理动词take后面少一个宾语,而我们又发现这个宾语中有动词,很容易就能联想到上面提到的在新概念三册中说到的句型。所以大家可以毫不犹豫地把that改成what。记住,that是不能引导名词性从句的,一般我们见到的名词性从句引导词有what 和how。比如:I agree with what you say/I don’t know how you deal with the rubbish.
  错误9:请顺着前面那句话往下看19-20行:This modern treatment will cure leprosy in 6 to 12 months, depend on the form of the disease.(这种比较先进的治疗方法可以在6到12个月中把麻风病完全治好,但一切得看疾病的情况)。
  前半句话已经清晰的亮出谓语动词will cure,根据大家的语法知识,后半句不应该再出现谓语动词,所以动词depend肯定是个错误。那该怎么改呢?
  其实在新概念二册中我们已经讨论过现在分词或过去分词做伴随状语的问题,而这个语法难点在新概念三册中仍将是学习的重点之一。
  我们应该不陌生:分词作状语的时候,其逻辑主语通常是句子的主语,比如来看看新概念三册课文中的两句话:
  Looking into the drawing room, she saw a scene of confusion……此处的现在分词looking逻辑主语就是后半句的she, 她往房间里面看了看,发现里面是一片狼藉。
  Armed with the right tools and materials, the newlyweds gaily embark on the task of decorating their own homes. 这里的过去分词组armed with,其逻辑主语也是后半句的主语newlyweds: 新婚夫妇找来合适的工具和材料,喜气洋洋地开始布置新房。
除了这些常见的分词作伴随状语之外,新概念三册还带出另一个新的知识点——分词固定用语,即有些表示说话人对说话内容所持态度的ing分词,已经成为固定用语,可以不遵循其逻辑主语与句子主语一致的原则。三册中一个最典型的例子就是A Very Dear Cat《一只贵重的宝贝猫》的最后一句话:
  Considering the amount she paid, he was dear in more ways than one!(其中she表示丢失宠物猫的女士,而he指代那只宠物。女士用了1000英镑把自己的宝贝猫从绑票犯手中赎回来,所以“当女士考虑到她花的那笔高昂的赎金,这只宠物猫真的很令人感到心疼)。可见,分词considering的逻辑主语是“女士”,和后半句主语不一致。同学们千万别误认为这是一个语法错误。因为considering就属于我们刚刚提到的分词固定用语。
  同时,在新概念三册课堂的知识扩展上,老师会给大家进一步引申并罗列常见的分词固定用语,诸如:depending on (看情况);generally speaking(一般来说);talking of ( 说到); judging from(根据判断)等固定词组。等大家熟悉了这些固定用语后,遇到这道改错,会不会觉得很庆幸?
  错误10:Line 20-22:The WHO has given multi-drug therapy to patients freely for the last five years.( 在过去的5年里,世界卫生组织已经给麻风病人免费提供了这种治疗)。
  这句话考的很细,又是一个词汇问题的考核——兼有两种形式的副词:有些副词有两种形式,一种与形容词同形,一种是形容词加ly构成的;而它们的含义却不一定完全相同。
  类似的问题在新概念二册书中也出现过,整本书前前后后出现过的这类词汇有:
  hard/hardly ;loud/loudly; pretty/prettily; high/highly; low/lowly; late/lately; close/closely等,老师在课上都会作一一分析。
  同类问题在新概念三册又一次出现,并加深了难度。三册课本会讨论direct和directly; sharp和sharply, dead和deadly等难度颇深的词的区别,这里略点一二:
  direct 作副词在The Westhaven Express《开往威斯特海温的快车》一文里面有出现:The train went direct from my local station……意思是“径直地,不绕道地”
  而directly翻译为“立刻,马上”:Give me the answer directly!
  sharp作副词表示“准时”:He arrives at 7 sharp.
  sharply 表示“突然地”:The car turns sharply.
  dead作副词表示“完全地”:She stopped dead。
  deadly 表示“死一般地”:He is deadly pale 死人似地苍白
  而free和freely也是较为典型一组词,三册的课堂也会归纳到:
  free翻译为“免费地”;freely翻译为“自由地”。
  看到这里,上面的句子怎么改应该很清楚了。再来看看下面两句话:
  You can eat _______ in my restaurant whenever you like.
  You can speak _______ in front of me.
  第一句填free:在我的餐馆你随时可以来免费用餐。
  第二句填freely:在我面前你可以无拘无束的发表观点。

  改错中更多的是涉及语法考点。其实新概念二册整本书已经涵盖了从中学到英语6级常见的语法现象,吃透二册是攻破语法的关键,而新概念三册又起到一个锦上添花的作用。在巩固复习二册语法点的同时,还会出现一些更为复杂的新语法点,而根据上面这篇改错的例子,这些知识点又是6级出卷老师的偏爱。新概念的重要性,不言自喻。

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